Thursday, May 3, 2012

The rewrite paper

I am adding all the final touches to the unit paper that I am rewriting. I am rewriting the unit two manifesto. The first time I wrote it on how I believed the SAT was an unfair test. I didn't really connect well enough with the topic well enough to really get into the paper so it didn't turn out very well, but the topic of the new paper it the lowering of the US drinking age which is a topic that I have a lot of great experiences that can support this topic.

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  1. I also did my rewrite on the unit two paper. And yes, I also believe that the legal drinking age should be lowered. If at age 18 I can legal give my life for my country, then I should be legally able to drink before possibly giving said life.

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